Monday 10 May 2010

The Colony

The colony was abuzz with activity.
Yet another violent death! Was the “Big Foot” story true? Were giants trying to attack?
Meanwhile, Bobby’s mom rattled - " Stop Spilling breakfast! Look at the ants!" - "Ouch! Stop it Bobby – Don’t step on them!"
The ant colony dispersed wondering how "Big Foot" knew what was afoot!
Posted by Sowmya at 23:00
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4 comments:

  1. Mohan11 May 2010 at 03:59

    Nice one! Good try for sure on your maiden attempt. All the best :)

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  2. Sowmya11 May 2010 at 06:42

    Mohan - Thanks for the comment. I came across this form of fiction on Indiblogger and wanted to give it a go! It was tougher than I thought to say less than say more;)

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  3. Lakshmi rajan25 May 2010 at 17:28

    A great first attempt :) and liked the perspective from the Ant's point of view !

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  4. Sowmya25 May 2010 at 19:20

    Thanks Lakshmi. It is nice to get some encouragement. I have posted my second story today - do check it out and let me know what you think;)

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