Monday, 10 May 2010

The Colony

The colony was abuzz with activity.
Yet another violent death! Was the “Big Foot” story true? Were giants trying to attack?
Meanwhile, Bobby’s mom rattled - " Stop Spilling breakfast! Look at the ants!" - "Ouch! Stop it Bobby – Don’t step on them!"
The ant colony dispersed wondering how "Big Foot" knew what was afoot!
Posted by Sowmya at 23:00
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4 comments:

  1. Mohan11 May 2010 at 03:59

    Nice one! Good try for sure on your maiden attempt. All the best :)

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  2. Sowmya11 May 2010 at 06:42

    Mohan - Thanks for the comment. I came across this form of fiction on Indiblogger and wanted to give it a go! It was tougher than I thought to say less than say more;)

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  3. Lakshmi rajan25 May 2010 at 17:28

    A great first attempt :) and liked the perspective from the Ant's point of view !

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  4. Sowmya25 May 2010 at 19:20

    Thanks Lakshmi. It is nice to get some encouragement. I have posted my second story today - do check it out and let me know what you think;)

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